My Worst Mistake

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Winterfresh (This is who I am, an what I am about. If you don't like it, too damn bad!!!) on Saturday, 07-Mar-2009 3:24:01

Your tall figure walks towards me
Trying to get yourself back into my good graces
You try to hug me
I break away
You try to tell me you love me
But I couldn't care less about who you love or not
You were nothing more
Than a rebound
You were my device for vengeance against the world
To tell the world how angry I was when I was with you
But you
You played it to your advantage
You ran around
Like a female prostitute on the streets
From girl to girl
As if I was your toy
And you got bored of what I could have given you
But you were my worst mistake
You made me lose so much
So much I had
Before you came into the picture
So much I lost
Before you left my life
You played me like a fool
And I played the world like a fool
I feel horrible
For the mistake I made with you
I lost a wonderful lover
Who would and still does love me no matter what I have done
You did help me find myself
You got me into a dark corner when you entered my life
And when you left, things were unreparable
But now, the light is starting to show itself
I am starting to brighten
My worst mistake is starting to fade from memory
Although I cannot block it out from my heart and memory forever
I can try to forgive myself
I can repair my future
And I can forgive you
For what you have done
Although I can forgive
I cannot and will not forget

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Saturday, 07-Mar-2009 10:41:09

I like it. It's very deep and meaningful. So full of pain and remorse.

Post 3 by PorkInCider (Wind assisted.) on Saturday, 07-Mar-2009 10:56:07

I love it Sam. You're awesome, it's so deep, so intense, and mostly true of many people.

Post 4 by cumbiambera2005 (i just keep on posting!) on Saturday, 07-Mar-2009 18:16:31

Hmmmmmmm. Very true though.

Post 5 by SunshineAndRain (I'm happily married, a mom of two and a fulltime college student.) on Sunday, 08-Mar-2009 17:42:26

I liked it. Very thought-provoking, deep and raw. Nice job.